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my songggg

Hi HI

ok, a little update on my song..i've changed the melody quite a bit..
but i think i am stuck after these 2 verses, I've modified the verses quite a bit.

"Lord Your Love on Calvary
Gave me life and caused me to see
I turn my face I see Your grace
Gave me faith to run this race

I will walk in all of your ways
Put behind my doubts and dismay
Lord I want to trust and obey
Even when my heart gives way"

Just spoke to Andrew Yeo, asked me when you are stuck, how?
He told me, just wait on the Lord. Yeap. I will wait on HIM.
I'm praying that the chorus will reflect God...

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Yuhui said…
When I read your lyrics, I feel like there's no main theme to the song. So it's difficult for me to see what message you're trying to get across, aside from the obvious one about "God is good".

If I were you, I'd try to emulate a hymn, not a song of praise.
2:42 PM
r.u.t.h. said…
i think the chorus should reflect the theme.

well, we'll see how it goes... :)
10:50 PM
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